I’d take one more pass through this and strip the defensive stuff out ( we may have not been perfect stuff, etc.) just make it factual. 2) I’d move the sections on what Teneo does and what you do up to the top and then go through the details and how they have helped WJC; in this draft what the actual activities are sort of come in at the end. 3) If I were you I’d take Lasry out of this. You’ll get into a deep debate about who’s right and who’s not with CC on this. The list is really strong without it, so why get into that
“I’m also starting to worry that if this story gets out, we are screwed.”
I don’t deserve this from her and deserve a tad more respect or at least a direct dialogue for me to explain these things. She is acting like a spoiled brat kid who has nothing else to do but create issues to justify what she’s doing because she, as she has said, hasn’t found her way and has a lack of focus in her life. I realize she will be off of this soon but if it doesn’t come soon enough….