WikiLeaks: Edit The Server Sentence

In the meantime, I want to set to rest any questions about the current security of these files. So I’m handing over my email server and a thumb drive with copies of all the emails already provided to the State Department…” * On Fri, Aug 7, 2015 at 9:05 AM, Dan

Circling back to this. John, you said you might have ideas on how to edit > the server sentence? Brian just floated whether we should say “I messed up” > instead of “this was a screw-up.” What do folks think about that? Other > edits we should make? And then what are next steps here? > > On Fri, Aug 7, 2015 at 1:40 AM, Dan ______ > > wrote: > >> Made some edits here after chatting with Brian. He thought the “screw >> up” sound bite needed to be less hedged, so I moved the line about >> convenience and previous secretaries elsewhere. He also thought the server >> news should be down with the classified section and given a little set-up. >> Not sure if what i have here does the trick, but check it out. >> Dan

 

https://wikileaks.org/podesta-emails/emailid/41462

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